Another recent attempt : Hopefully a little flowy
Context: A very generic article I read that made me feel "ME Too!!" inducing yet another long, miserable mode of self-reflection. As a result I entirely missed the larger point it made. It was profound and beautiful as I later found out. Me too!?? So bloody what?
I read, write, listen and talk. I am
relating to me
always my experiences, my thoughts.
Why does it have to be me?
Do 'I' matter I ask
the grand scheme of things.
Is not there somebody else
the world revolves around?
relating to me
always my experiences, my thoughts.
Why does it have to be me?
Do 'I' matter I ask
the grand scheme of things.
Is not there somebody else
the world revolves around?
Self-centered. No. I am
but self-obssessed?
If there be a difference.
Look, I go there again.
Look within? 'virtue' you say.
But I ever go inward-out?
Stuck in. I am
trapped. Hard to untangle
the I-web.
Weird watching the world. from within
and without
strength to fight free.
Move outward. Thoughtlessly like.
The path unclear
awaiting ME. I laugh


3 comments:
The only way I have of understanding anything around me is through me and my experiences.
what is fighting free and moving outward? I guess it is a little more profound thought that I have no idea about.
both the poems were nice though...i enjoyed reading it..
nothing profound. i don't want to be caught up in what i call the web of I. i want to truly see things.
from outside. To see what i otherwise can't because i am chained to myself
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